tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-245503396844374866.post8814861625534535527..comments2024-03-11T14:38:38.995+05:30Comments on DEW: BETRAYALKISLAYA GOPALhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09647106515193706602noreply@blogger.comBlogger50125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-245503396844374866.post-47863160522841766832013-06-10T19:51:52.657+05:302013-06-10T19:51:52.657+05:30Beautiful.Beautiful.rudraprayagahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13775039913655864157noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-245503396844374866.post-75487410255750965622013-05-30T02:25:35.295+05:302013-05-30T02:25:35.295+05:30Earlier even I didnt, but once got to know the rul...Earlier even I didnt, but once got to know the rules and I started writing it myself, got a hang of it, <br />There is beauty of expression in less words, multiple Inerpretations, and various angles to look at it from a readers perspective. I m sure if you try you will find it interesting.KISLAYA GOPALhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09647106515193706602noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-245503396844374866.post-54251619652220014472013-05-30T02:21:46.805+05:302013-05-30T02:21:46.805+05:30Thanx so much :)Thanx so much :)KISLAYA GOPALhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09647106515193706602noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-245503396844374866.post-30051034166213245372013-05-30T02:21:09.860+05:302013-05-30T02:21:09.860+05:30Thanx :)Thanx :)KISLAYA GOPALhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09647106515193706602noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-245503396844374866.post-80999478703630644762013-05-28T00:28:48.462+05:302013-05-28T00:28:48.462+05:30Wel i dnt quite undstand haikus.....i duno how ppl...Wel i dnt quite undstand haikus.....i duno how ppl pull it off.....Ritesh Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10719270476812591328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-245503396844374866.post-33561174565781788522013-05-23T19:42:52.069+05:302013-05-23T19:42:52.069+05:30:):)KISLAYA GOPALhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09647106515193706602noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-245503396844374866.post-32274853297919770712013-05-23T15:56:26.651+05:302013-05-23T15:56:26.651+05:30Great impact with your well chosen words!! Excelle...Great impact with your well chosen words!! Excellent!!Nankahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05428694673909046094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-245503396844374866.post-58522464241064889182013-05-23T14:50:12.268+05:302013-05-23T14:50:12.268+05:30Short and sweet.Short and sweet.rudraprayagahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13775039913655864157noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-245503396844374866.post-21684372959715975102013-05-23T06:47:25.079+05:302013-05-23T06:47:25.079+05:30Visually evocativeVisually evocativemagiceyehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17848851692951192508noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-245503396844374866.post-8569895604616059962013-05-22T22:06:23.122+05:302013-05-22T22:06:23.122+05:30What I want to portray here is that the girl is wa...What I want to portray here is that the girl is waiting, as you said in an elated mood, in the most romantic moment, but in that very moment of ecstasy she is betrayed and her 'to be' best moment becomes her worst moment. KISLAYA GOPALhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09647106515193706602noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-245503396844374866.post-44870185702933828552013-05-22T21:58:05.495+05:302013-05-22T21:58:05.495+05:30Hmm..... thanxHmm..... thanxKISLAYA GOPALhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09647106515193706602noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-245503396844374866.post-78499941431579960062013-05-22T21:56:04.469+05:302013-05-22T21:56:04.469+05:30Thanx claudia :) I guess haiku is all about this.Thanx claudia :) I guess haiku is all about this.KISLAYA GOPALhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09647106515193706602noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-245503396844374866.post-29275783972981903502013-05-22T21:34:04.407+05:302013-05-22T21:34:04.407+05:30:) thnx
Regards:) thnx<br />RegardsKISLAYA GOPALhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09647106515193706602noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-245503396844374866.post-69362811264266055002013-05-22T12:37:07.367+05:302013-05-22T12:37:07.367+05:30I think this Haiku has a dual tone. One of ecstasy...I think this Haiku has a dual tone. One of ecstasy as well as that of betrayal. You've taken the one of betrayal but it's still ambiguous, don't you think?Brendan Dabhihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02553127085253015495noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-245503396844374866.post-4648714530659994882013-05-22T11:57:53.659+05:302013-05-22T11:57:53.659+05:30short, straight and sad but very well expressed.short, straight and sad but very well expressed.Rathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14621417958017949084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-245503396844374866.post-72086451119052941442013-05-22T10:23:07.549+05:302013-05-22T10:23:07.549+05:30oh heck...you create an intense image in just few ...oh heck...you create an intense image in just few lines..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-245503396844374866.post-51320214514797054952013-05-22T09:32:03.650+05:302013-05-22T09:32:03.650+05:30Awesome...Beautiful.
Regards Awesome...Beautiful.<br />Regards Tejinder Kaurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08672636243873485417noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-245503396844374866.post-69811934020153390882013-05-22T05:45:16.515+05:302013-05-22T05:45:16.515+05:30Short but soulful Haiku.Short but soulful Haiku.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-245503396844374866.post-42192634802771034332013-05-22T03:39:30.017+05:302013-05-22T03:39:30.017+05:30Thnk you Claudia.Thnk you Claudia.KISLAYA GOPALhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09647106515193706602noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-245503396844374866.post-83511783434071192552013-05-22T03:37:27.542+05:302013-05-22T03:37:27.542+05:30Hmmm, but I guess for now thats the end of the sto...Hmmm, but I guess for now thats the end of the story.....betrayal!KISLAYA GOPALhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09647106515193706602noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-245503396844374866.post-4155037015002650072013-05-22T03:36:47.573+05:302013-05-22T03:36:47.573+05:30Beautifully sad haiku! Nice take on the prompt. :...Beautifully sad haiku! Nice take on the prompt. :)Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09248433101725524304noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-245503396844374866.post-42733185945845982932013-05-22T03:13:24.910+05:302013-05-22T03:13:24.910+05:30Oh this is mysterious and good x I want to know mo...Oh this is mysterious and good x I want to know more!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-245503396844374866.post-59119199632741025332013-05-22T02:10:34.688+05:302013-05-22T02:10:34.688+05:30Thanx Sid, seeing you after so long, keep visiting...Thanx Sid, seeing you after so long, keep visitingKISLAYA GOPALhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09647106515193706602noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-245503396844374866.post-5147733199941230332013-05-22T01:24:27.848+05:302013-05-22T01:24:27.848+05:30finally a good haiku from you after a long timefinally a good haiku from you after a long timeAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15640615775371569867noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-245503396844374866.post-69722401012702494582013-05-22T01:20:28.621+05:302013-05-22T01:20:28.621+05:30Yes Reshma, life is full of such contrasts!
ThnxYes Reshma, life is full of such contrasts!<br />ThnxKISLAYA GOPALhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09647106515193706602noreply@blogger.com