Thursday, May 2, 2013

DAY 28 - COLOURED LOVE













In the GOLDEN sunshine
My skin glows YELLOW
You see me with CRIMSON desire
My cheeks turn FUCHSIA PINK

As we drink ORANGE juice
On the WHITE sand beach
Under the AZURE sky
We forget our BLUES

We gaze and we look into
Each other’s CHAMOISEE eyes
We are lost in LAVENDER love
Holding each other’s TANNED hands

In the PEARLY ambience
As the SILVER time flows
You draw me near
Caress my JET-BLACK hair
Kiss my RED lips!
And lock our COLORED love!









46 comments:

  1. Brilliant post filled with colors!!!!! Loved it!

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  2. Colorful post with right elements of words !

    Nice Post !

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  3. Love brings beautiful Colours in life

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  4. An ode one but quite artistically done :)

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    1. Thank you so much Ankur for appreciating! :)

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  5. sure, the love is with a riot of colors.nice composition.

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  6. Hey Kislaya. This is a superb composition based on a great idea. Inclusion of the corresponding colours on desired places has given it an aura much needeed for a romantic composition. ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC.

    You see me with CRIMSON desire
    My cheeks turn FUCHSIA PINK

    My fav. lines. Keep flourishing dear. :)

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    1. Deepak Thanx for getting the essence behind this composition! Your appreciation has really made my day! That the inclusion of colours in corresponding places is liked by you, means a lot, because while doing so this was the idea behind it, in my mind.

      Thanx so much! :)

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  7. Oh Wow ! This is awesome and very colourful.!!

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  8. what an awesome achievement. 28 days of beautiful poems. I must confess,I was too chicken even to try. Loved the colours.

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    1. Oh Wow Sonia, thanx for appreciating. :)
      Keep visiting!

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  9. very creative. very colorful. very very romantic. loved it :)

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    1. Thanx Meera for liking it, very very much :)

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  10. That's really amazing! Awesome idea!

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  11. wat a wonderful idea!its really attractive n romantic of course...

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    1. Hmm... yes it is...Thank you so much for appreciating! :)

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  12. Indeed colorful and thoughtful at same time

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  13. a beautiful composition about the most pure feeling in the world 'Love'

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  14. Very cool wordplay on the meaning of different colour, all representing a wonderful love story... :-)

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  15. smiles...this is a colorful love for sure...love the lavender love and yeah...we should never love just black and white...smiles

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    1. Thanx Claudia for getting the message behind it, I am happy thst you appreciated.

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  16. ha. very nice...i like your play with color in this....there is so much color int he world that we need to appreciate, well beyond what we are comfortable with..smiles.

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    1. Yes, life is full of colors only we need to be receptive, we need to percieve it.
      Thnx

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  17. So creative and colorful, with a message that is warm and wonderful.

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    1. Oh thank you love is colourful and beautiful, a divine feeling

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  18. Life without colour is a life with soul!

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    1. Yes what is life without colour? Thanx for visiting this space!

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