I have to leave
My dear love
My heart silently grieves
As I think of this
Years of togetherness
And now this separation
For lonely phase ahead
Can we have reparation?
Coming times will challenge
Us, and give us pain
Do not deter, keep in mind
There is no gain without pain
As moments of departure
Draws near; it is hard to bear,
And the lump in my throat
Melts tear by tear
I will be gone, but
For a while
You know our destiny has
Other plans, besides
I will be gone, but
Not for long
You will be in my heart
Forever smiling and strong
Distance can not
Weaken our bond
Time will only
Strengthen this chord!
very emotional poem indeed...moreover the last para n d photo complements each other.superb n simple!!!
ReplyDeleteThank you...it indeed is emotional.
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beautiful,and very emotional poem
ReplyDeleteThanx Sasmit! Any improvements I need my critic?
DeleteVery moving and a poignant poem. The optimism behind it makes it unique.
ReplyDeleteThe perspective of looking at things really matters, as that determines your attitude and the ability to cope with circumstances.
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That's very touching song of love...The ache of leaving and the hope for future blend together beautifully Kislaya.
ReplyDeleteThank you Reshma! This blend is very important for balancing the elements of our life!
DeletePretty emotional eh? Beautifully written!
ReplyDeleteThank you Himanshu, emotional it is!
Deletedistance or time ... nothing can fade out love .. awesome lines !
ReplyDeleteTouchy...really touchy.
ReplyDeleteLoved the optimistic feeling in it. :)
Thanks Sourav.. I am happy I could convey what I wanted to! :)
DeleteNice write packed with emotions.Painful parting words. "Shall the day of parting be the day of gathering? says Kahlil Gibran.
ReplyDeleteYes that is a nice thought, let the day of parting be the day of gathering! :)
DeleteVery moving poem. Reminded me of some friends who had gone abroad on different assignments leaving behind their spouses.
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DeleteAnd I do understand if it reminds you of friends..
Pleasure having you on my blog! :)
Pain, expressed so beautifully!
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I can so easily relate to it.....love is often the precursor to pain....and when one walks away leaving u stranded amidst memories, u can do nothing more than to wait and hope that the person chooses to return....for there is no element more painful than love, and there is nothing more healing than hope.
ReplyDeleteI agree with you completly Ritesh..
ReplyDeleteBut sometimes situations and circumstances demand so.. and there is no option to circumvent it!
Thanks!!
i wont say how well have you written, instead of that i would say you wrote with heart ! which is in itself beautiful .. captivating and painful at the same time ...
ReplyDeleteThanx Aziz for understanding what I wanted to convey in simple words from my heart!
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DeleteBeautiful and painful lines. Ends on a loving note.
ReplyDeleteThe best line - "And the lump in my throat,
melts tear by tear".
Keep writing!!
I am glad that you found it Good.
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Simplicity in your words is the beauty here. Keep writing!!
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ohh such deep thoughts, such deep meanings...loved it totally :)
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Oh its great pleasure that you loved it!
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A very touching poetry which seems to have come directly from the heart! Liked it a lot!
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Yes Bushra this poetry has come from my heart! Thanx for liking!
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Nice and painful. You can feel the seperation
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The words just hit the soul...very good dear :)
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to emote while maintaining the rhyme is a difficult job to do. And you have done it beautifully....
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Ohh I feel so elated by this compliment of yours.!!
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