Pure Gentle Soothing !
nice imagery...:) But, is your syllable count ok??
Thanx Panchali Mam! Yes syllable count is okay!
both are delightful. I too used to watch aladdin when i was kid! I saw your comment on my blog, thank you! :) I was shocked when I saw only pictures of Princess Jasmine. I am a big fan of animated movie though, but nothing precedes nature. Even here, first haiku is about nature. and only then, the princess! ;) I enjoyed reading them!
Thanx Jayanth.. :)Yes nature is topmost, seems you too are lover of nature!
Beautiful images in both haiku!
Thank you :)
How sweet and I love Aladdin! Nicely written.
Thank yo so much. Even i like Aladdin :)
Both are beautiful...Well done .Kislaya Gopal...a budding poet here...nice to see your thoughts about writing...it would encourage many others to follow path...http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/04/she-waters-jasmine.html#comment-formRS
Thank you Ramesh Sir. Your appreciation is most welcome! :)
Both haiku well-build well done.
Thank you so much :)
Jasmine and Aladdin ... what a love story that is :-)
Yes it is :)
nice comparison ....love jasmines..!!!
I love the smell of Jasmine. Thank you! :)
Hahaha!! Finally Alladins Jasmine is immortalized in your Haiku!!...and in southern parts of India, Jasmine flower garlands are extensively used to adorn deities, temples and palanquins!!So 'Blessing showers' makes it so appropriate in the haiku!!
Thank You, Nanka Mam. Regarding the garland of jasmine flowers, thanx for the information. Also I read your haiku and you have beautifully picturised the garland strings and the market place :)
Thank you Amresh :)
Keep it up KG...you create good haiku...appreciate your comment on my blog..Can you reach out to Panchali and tell her that I read her haiku with interest and can't get to comment on her page because of some technicalities...I am not a very computer savvy person..Thanks..RS
Thank You Ramesh Sir. And thanx for giving me a pen name- KG :)I posted on Panchali mam's blog on your behalf. Take care
Very nicely done. The second one is very creative
Thank You Dear! :)
Very nice poems.
Like Alladin since he can give me tons of jasmine. Nice, captivating composition.
Thank you Arumugam sir! :)
:) i am happy to have that expression!
wow ..loved the flowers too ,keep writing !
Ya sure Narula, thanx for encouraging words!
Love the alladin one,but both of them are good
Yeah somehow I like that one as it was one of my favourite cartoon! :) thank you for liking!
Hmmm! Jasmine one of my favorite flowers... Cool Thot! :)
Thats good. Keep visiting :)
A very good one...And the blog looks pleasant too!!!
Thanx Satya for the kind words of appreciation. I am humbled! :)
:) Love your haikus...