Thursday, April 11, 2013

JASMINE




Luscious buds
Fragrant flowers
Blessing Showers






Jasmine love
Aladdin’s delight
One thousand and one nights




Inspired by the theme at








41 comments:

  1. nice imagery...:)
    But, is your syllable count ok??

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    1. Thanx Panchali Mam! Yes syllable count is okay!

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  2. both are delightful.
    I too used to watch aladdin when i was kid! I saw your comment on my blog, thank you! :) I was shocked when I saw only pictures of Princess Jasmine. I am a big fan of animated movie though, but nothing precedes nature. Even here, first haiku is about nature. and only then, the princess! ;) I enjoyed reading them!

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    1. Thanx Jayanth.. :)
      Yes nature is topmost, seems you too are lover of nature!

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  3. How sweet and I love Aladdin! Nicely written.

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  4. Both are beautiful...Well done .Kislaya Gopal...a budding poet here...nice to see your thoughts about writing...it would encourage many others to follow path...

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/04/she-waters-jasmine.html#comment-form

    RS

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    1. Thank you Ramesh Sir. Your appreciation is most welcome! :)

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  5. Both haiku well-build well done.

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  6. Jasmine and Aladdin ... what a love story that is :-)

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  7. Hahaha!! Finally Alladins Jasmine is immortalized in your Haiku!!...and in southern parts of India, Jasmine flower garlands are extensively used to adorn deities, temples and palanquins!!So 'Blessing showers' makes it so appropriate in the haiku!!

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    1. Thank You, Nanka Mam. Regarding the garland of jasmine flowers, thanx for the information. Also I read your haiku and you have beautifully picturised the garland strings and the market place :)

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  8. Keep it up KG...you create good haiku...appreciate your comment on my blog..

    Can you reach out to Panchali and tell her that I read her haiku with interest and can't get to comment on her page because of some technicalities...I am not a very computer savvy person..

    Thanks..

    RS

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    1. Thank You Ramesh Sir. And thanx for giving me a pen name- KG :)
      I posted on Panchali mam's blog on your behalf. Take care

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  9. Very nicely done. The second one is very creative

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  10. Like Alladin since he can give me tons of jasmine. Nice, captivating composition.

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  11. wow ..loved the flowers too ,keep writing !

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    1. Ya sure Narula, thanx for encouraging words!

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  12. Love the alladin one,but both of them are good

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    1. Yeah somehow I like that one as it was one of my favourite cartoon! :) thank you for liking!

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  13. Hmmm! Jasmine one of my favorite flowers... Cool Thot! :)

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  14. A very good one...
    And the blog looks pleasant too!!!

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    1. Thanx Satya for the kind words of appreciation. I am humbled! :)

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