both are delightful. I too used to watch aladdin when i was kid! I saw your comment on my blog, thank you! :) I was shocked when I saw only pictures of Princess Jasmine. I am a big fan of animated movie though, but nothing precedes nature. Even here, first haiku is about nature. and only then, the princess! ;) I enjoyed reading them!
Both are beautiful...Well done .Kislaya Gopal...a budding poet here...nice to see your thoughts about writing...it would encourage many others to follow path...
Hahaha!! Finally Alladins Jasmine is immortalized in your Haiku!!...and in southern parts of India, Jasmine flower garlands are extensively used to adorn deities, temples and palanquins!!So 'Blessing showers' makes it so appropriate in the haiku!!
Thank You, Nanka Mam. Regarding the garland of jasmine flowers, thanx for the information. Also I read your haiku and you have beautifully picturised the garland strings and the market place :)
Keep it up KG...you create good haiku...appreciate your comment on my blog..
Can you reach out to Panchali and tell her that I read her haiku with interest and can't get to comment on her page because of some technicalities...I am not a very computer savvy person..
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nice imagery...:)
ReplyDeleteBut, is your syllable count ok??
Thanx Panchali Mam! Yes syllable count is okay!
Deleteboth are delightful.
ReplyDeleteI too used to watch aladdin when i was kid! I saw your comment on my blog, thank you! :) I was shocked when I saw only pictures of Princess Jasmine. I am a big fan of animated movie though, but nothing precedes nature. Even here, first haiku is about nature. and only then, the princess! ;) I enjoyed reading them!
Thanx Jayanth.. :)
DeleteYes nature is topmost, seems you too are lover of nature!
Beautiful images in both haiku!
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteHow sweet and I love Aladdin! Nicely written.
ReplyDeleteThank yo so much. Even i like Aladdin :)
DeleteBoth are beautiful...Well done .Kislaya Gopal...a budding poet here...nice to see your thoughts about writing...it would encourage many others to follow path...
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Thank you Ramesh Sir. Your appreciation is most welcome! :)
DeleteBoth haiku well-build well done.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much :)
DeleteJasmine and Aladdin ... what a love story that is :-)
ReplyDeleteYes it is :)
Deletenice comparison ....love jasmines..!!!
ReplyDeleteI love the smell of Jasmine. Thank you! :)
DeleteThank you :)
ReplyDeleteHahaha!! Finally Alladins Jasmine is immortalized in your Haiku!!...and in southern parts of India, Jasmine flower garlands are extensively used to adorn deities, temples and palanquins!!So 'Blessing showers' makes it so appropriate in the haiku!!
ReplyDeleteThank You, Nanka Mam. Regarding the garland of jasmine flowers, thanx for the information. Also I read your haiku and you have beautifully picturised the garland strings and the market place :)
Deletewonderful :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Amresh :)
DeleteKeep it up KG...you create good haiku...appreciate your comment on my blog..
ReplyDeleteCan you reach out to Panchali and tell her that I read her haiku with interest and can't get to comment on her page because of some technicalities...I am not a very computer savvy person..
Thanks..
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Thank You Ramesh Sir. And thanx for giving me a pen name- KG :)
DeleteI posted on Panchali mam's blog on your behalf. Take care
Very nicely done. The second one is very creative
ReplyDeleteThank You Dear! :)
DeleteVery nice poems.
ReplyDeleteThanx Alice!
DeleteLike Alladin since he can give me tons of jasmine. Nice, captivating composition.
ReplyDeleteThank you Arumugam sir! :)
DeleteShubhan Allah!!!
ReplyDelete:) i am happy to have that expression!
Deletewow ..loved the flowers too ,keep writing !
ReplyDeleteYa sure Narula, thanx for encouraging words!
DeleteLove the alladin one,but both of them are good
ReplyDeleteYeah somehow I like that one as it was one of my favourite cartoon! :) thank you for liking!
DeleteHmmm! Jasmine one of my favorite flowers... Cool Thot! :)
ReplyDeleteThats good. Keep visiting :)
DeleteA very good one...
ReplyDeleteAnd the blog looks pleasant too!!!
Thanx Satya for the kind words of appreciation. I am humbled! :)
Delete:) Love your haikus...
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