Friday, April 12, 2013

KOI POND


Soothing ripples
Oh! Colored creature
Voice of nature



Inspired by the theme at
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33 comments:

  1. Ramesh SoodFriday, April 12, 2013 12:27:00 AM

    I can see, hear and feel...wonderful haiku...and Kislaya thanks for your help...you did well..

    RS

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  2. Sankara Jayanth SFriday, April 12, 2013 12:28:00 AM

    colored creature, voice of nature.. brilliant and beautiful!! :)
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    If you'd like to read mine, here it is: http://wp.me/p1QKRs-WP

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    1. KISLAYA GOPALFriday, April 12, 2013 1:09:00 AM

      :) Thank you... I read yours and it is a beautiful one, indeed.

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  3. ʞɐFriday, April 12, 2013 12:51:00 AM

    Ah, Thats' beautifully written. :)

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  4. PanchaliFriday, April 12, 2013 2:26:00 AM

    Aesthetic work! Lovely, kislaya:)

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    1. KISLAYA GOPALFriday, April 12, 2013 11:03:00 AM

      Thank You Panchali Mam, i am glad that you liked it :)

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  5. AnonymousFriday, April 12, 2013 3:52:00 AM

    Lovely words.

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  6. Magical Mystical TeacherFriday, April 12, 2013 4:20:00 AM

    Not everyone can hear their voices...

    Schools of Koi

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  7. PranitaFriday, April 12, 2013 12:23:00 PM

    This prompt is getting the best out of ppl i guess! Loved the read..

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    1. KISLAYA GOPALFriday, April 12, 2013 2:11:00 PM

      Thanx Pranita. Your appreciation has really made my day :)

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  8. NankaFriday, April 12, 2013 3:12:00 PM

    Soothing and colors go so well with the prompt!!

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    1. KISLAYA GOPALFriday, April 12, 2013 3:48:00 PM

      Thank you Nanka mam. Your appreciation is always cherished! :)

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  9. AnonymousFriday, April 12, 2013 5:14:00 PM

    All seem part of nature. Very good one.

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  10. AnonymousFriday, April 12, 2013 5:46:00 PM

    Koi as the underwater voice is quite fascinating...

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  11. KISLAYA GOPALFriday, April 12, 2013 9:38:00 PM

    Thanx Magiceye!

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  12. AnonymousFriday, April 12, 2013 9:39:00 PM

    Simply wonderful

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  13. LLM CallingFriday, April 12, 2013 11:03:00 PM

    speaking in colour
    nature's tales of heartbreak
    shines gold still

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    1. KISLAYA GOPALFriday, April 12, 2013 11:43:00 PM

      Hmm..Thanx for another wonderful haiku...a poignant one at that.

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  14. ClaudiaSaturday, April 13, 2013 1:04:00 AM

    "Soothing ripples", I like that line. The sound of flowing water is very relaxing to me. :)

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  15. UnknownSaturday, April 13, 2013 12:52:00 PM

    Very well done!!! Keep writing such Haiku on Nature!

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  16. Amrit SinhaSaturday, April 13, 2013 6:32:00 PM

    This really soothes my mind !!!

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  17. UnknownMonday, April 15, 2013 1:59:00 PM

    nice haiku:)

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  18. AnonymousWednesday, April 17, 2013 2:49:00 PM


    its such a lovely poem. please keep them coming.

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