Friday, April 12, 2013

KOI POND


Soothing ripples
Oh! Colored creature
Voice of nature





Inspired by the theme at

33 comments:

  1. I can see, hear and feel...wonderful haiku...and Kislaya thanks for your help...you did well..

    RS

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  2. colored creature, voice of nature.. brilliant and beautiful!! :)
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    If you'd like to read mine, here it is: http://wp.me/p1QKRs-WP

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    1. :) Thank you... I read yours and it is a beautiful one, indeed.

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  3. Ah, Thats' beautifully written. :)

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    1. Thank You Panchali Mam, i am glad that you liked it :)

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  5. This prompt is getting the best out of ppl i guess! Loved the read..

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    1. Thanx Pranita. Your appreciation has really made my day :)

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  6. Soothing and colors go so well with the prompt!!

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    1. Thank you Nanka mam. Your appreciation is always cherished! :)

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  7. All seem part of nature. Very good one.

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  8. Koi as the underwater voice is quite fascinating...

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  9. speaking in colour
    nature's tales of heartbreak
    shines gold still

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    1. Hmm..Thanx for another wonderful haiku...a poignant one at that.

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  10. "Soothing ripples", I like that line. The sound of flowing water is very relaxing to me. :)

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  11. Very well done!!! Keep writing such Haiku on Nature!

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  12. its such a lovely poem. please keep them coming.

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