Thursday, November 29, 2012

I WANT TO BE FREE



I want to be free
Like a flying bird
High in the sky
Without any sigh!

I want to be free
Like a gliding duck
Swimming without bother
With no illusion of luck!

I want to be free
Like a running ostrich
Gliding through air
With no worries of being rich!

I want to be free
Like a standing tall tree
Living on its own term
Yet giving to everyone!

I want to be free
Like a shooting star
Far away
Yet an aura for every heart!

24 comments:

  1. freedom comes through expression also...i learnt through this poem.simple yet subtle.

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  2. simple and insightful. Enjoyed reading it.
    A typo in first line of 2nd stanza...you have missed 'be'

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    1. Thanx Arch Wordsmith! And thank you for notifying the error, I have rectified it. I appreciate your feedback! :)

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  3. Beautifully written...Being free is greatest joy!!

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  4. The feeling of free ! well expressed through this poem ! quite rhythmic too ..

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  5. Freedom is like Manna from the sky, needed for growth. Like it.

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    1. What does manna mean?
      Thanx for appreciating!

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  6. I want to be free from the human body :)
    nice read !!

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  7. Hope you attain that freedom soon!!

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  8. simple.. rhyming.. powerful. beautifully expressed :)

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