Tuesday, April 9, 2013

HUNTER













Dreary ambience
Sinister silence, aim the shot
game you slay

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Adrenaline rush
gives the push, off ye go
for prized kill



Inspired by the theme at




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BLISS
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16 comments:

  1. Loved the verses.
    Nicely written. :)

    Take Care and Keep Writing. :)

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  2. You have captured the ways of the hunter well!

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    1. I am happy that i could do that. Thank you :)

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  3. loved your take! I especially enjoyed the second one!

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  4. Dreary ambience
    Sinister silence, aim the shot
    game you slay

    MASTERSTROKE.

    Sinister Silence. esp. loved it.

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    1. Hmm... Thank you. Infact even I liked the alliteration- 'Sinister Silence' while writing. So you have read the writer's mind!

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  5. Felt the hunter skill all the way.

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    1. Thank you Neelam for dropping by and appreciating!

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  6. Beautiful composition. Nicely captured the dreadfulness of the act for little gain.

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    1. yes, but predator prey relation is maintaining the balance in our ecosystem, so it is also important.

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