I love Haiku .. they are compact yet detailed ... almost like cartoons and doodles .. loads of things very compact..and I must say Kislaya,each time you come up with a haiku you cross your previous bar of excellence !! Super Like !!
Oh thank you so very much Nitesh, your compliments have really elated me, and I hope to cross the previous bar of excellence each time! :) Thanx again.
Wonderful set of haikus I really enjoy the flow
ReplyDeleteThank you so much! Glad you enjoyed! :)
DeleteI enjoyed this set of haiku. They work well together.
ReplyDeleteOh Thanx Alice for enjoying! :)
DeleteEach haiku builds upon the joy of storytelling. Nicely written.
ReplyDeleteThank you Write girl!
DeleteYou have a library of story books here!! ;) and a good one too!!
ReplyDeleteHa ha ha...definitely and Thank you! :)
DeleteBeautiful...I would go by what Nanka said...difficult to choose from for me..all appears interesting..
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thank you so much! I am glad!
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Beautiful, I like the way you moved from one to another. Each fitting with the previous.
ReplyDeleteOhh...thank you Saru! :)
DeleteI love the style of your poetry! It's so different! Enjoyed it! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you for the compliment Bushra! :)
DeleteCool set!
ReplyDeleteGreat Haiku. Beautiful thoughts
ReplyDeleteThank you! :)
Deleteall great haiku ... timeless indeed
ReplyDeleteThanx Lady in read!
DeleteKeep visiting! :)
you write pretty nice set of haiku.enjoyed it :)
ReplyDeleteThanx Ankur for the compliments, I hope I keep doing the same! :)
DeleteBeautifully unique take on the prompt
ReplyDeleteThank you Celestiene!! :)
DeleteYour set has captured the beauty of story-telling Kislaya:)
ReplyDeleteThank you Reshma!! :)
DeleteI love Haiku .. they are compact yet detailed ... almost like cartoons and doodles .. loads of things very compact..and I must say Kislaya,each time you come up with a haiku you cross your previous bar of excellence !!
ReplyDeleteSuper Like !!
Oh thank you so very much Nitesh, your compliments have really elated me, and I hope to cross the previous bar of excellence each time! :)
DeleteThanx again.
liked all!!! each one has a meaning within :)
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DeleteLiterature is a priceless creation of mankind. So true.
ReplyDeleteYes literature is legacy of our continuing civilisation.
DeleteVery nice :)
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DeleteThat's real Haiku. Enjoyed.
ReplyDeleteAll the haiku's were phenomenal ! a big thumps up !
ReplyDeleteLovely! such an amazing rhythm which is important for haiku :)
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:) thanx Richa...
DeleteCute! Very cute!
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Oh thank you
DeleteBeautiful Kislaya
ReplyDeleteThnx.
DeleteAh, i had also used that image for a post of mine....its so powerful na.....nice poem, tho i dnt quite undstand haikus :)
ReplyDeleteSo true, poetry is indeed inherently moral! I liked that point the most. Novel use of adjectives there.
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