A triolet is an eight-line poem. All the lines are in iambic tetramenter (for a total of eight syllables per line), and the first, fourth, and seventh lines are identical, as are the second and final lines. This means that the poem begins and ends with the same couplet. Beyond this, there is a tight rhyme scheme (helped along by the repetition of lines) — ABaAabAB. Triolets were in vogue among the Victorians
I have found a friend who is true!
We share a bond - so magical.
Who will never bid me adieu
I have found a friend; who is true.
Whose love for me is pure like dew;
'Gift of friendship' is sacred bliss.
I have found a friend, who is true.
We share a bond - so magical!
True friendship comes when silence between two people is comfortable.
- Gentry, David Tyson
Lovely verse these kislaya. Simple words can a leave profound influence if treated with pure heart. Loved it thoroughly. Kudos to you, also to your true frnd for that matter.. ;)
ReplyDeleteThanx Deepak. That is true, sometimes simple words or things can allure more.
DeleteAnd yes somewhere we have to take inspiration from a real person or incidence. :)
awesome yet again !! whose love is pure like dew - wow !!! hats off !!
ReplyDelete:) thanx, keep visiting :)
DeleteA single rose can be my garden ... a single friend my world, so goes a quote.
ReplyDeleteThis poetry is a nice tribute to friendship. Kudos!
Thanx for the beautiful quote, and thank you for appreciating! :)
DeleteAmazing words to represent most wonderful relationship in world :)
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Ys frienship truly is a bliss! :)
DeleteNow this is what i am talking about,brilliant,beautiful and majestic
ReplyDeleteThanx my biggest critic, I always want to live upto your expectation in writing. :)
Deletevery sweet! hard to find such friends though!
ReplyDeleteThanx, it is hard but is not impossible. The ones who have them can truly understand :)
DeleteThat was quite sweet and rhythmic !
ReplyDeleteoh Thank you so much. :)
DeleteSo fresh, sweet and true to its root !
ReplyDelete:) thanx again!
Deletea true friend s really a 'Gift of God'...nice one!!!
ReplyDeleteYou are right, Thanx, keep visiting! :)
Delete:) thank you
ReplyDeleteGreat stuff.
ReplyDeletenicely written as always ..but i liked the informative insight about trio-let !
ReplyDeleteOh Thank you Ankur... Yeah even this is my first attempt at triolet, came to know about it through Napowrimo prompt :)
Deletekeep visiting! :)
U had written right, in friendship there must be trust
ReplyDeleteIn any relation trust is the most important aspect!
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This is Amazing to see this Blog Kaju...Soo Simply written yet So magical..
ReplyDeleteIt brings the feelings of bliss..yes "Gift of Friendship" is a Bliss .. and very nice to see ur researching and growing and U have made ur dairy public...:) Keep Writing and love U..:)
Thanx dearest....your reply is a gift of friendship!!!!!!!! love u 2 :)
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