Monday, April 22, 2013

TSUNAMI



Unbridled rage
Tsunami of emotion,
Ruins Relation







Inspired by the theme at




33 comments:

  1. I had almost written something like Tsunami of emotions..good that I didn't ..you did better..liked it..

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/04/tilted-earth-haiku.html

    RS

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  2. Emotions can run high with unbridled force and often are destructive in this mode! Lovely haiku!

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    1. Yes that is very true, therefore we should have self control. thanx :)

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  3. Truly depicts the reason of sad plight. Sensible Haiku!

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  4. "Unbridled"...yes, the emotional turmoil ultimately drains life force and diminishes well-being.Great job, Kislaya:)

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    1. We should control our rage and anger, also we shouldn't flow in emotions!
      Thank you :)

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  5. So true...
    "Tsunami of emotions" stole my heart!!!

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  6. Awesome ... hard hitting 3 lines ... enough to erode the land of emotions !!

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  7. Tsunami of emotions always make us go berserk. A three line poetry bring world of meaning.

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    1. Yes thats true, so a control on our emotions is very necessary! thanx for reading

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  8. its good, I liked it though I am yet to get an hang of Haiku as it is

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    1. Ya I understand, even I had to get a hang of it, but once I did I like it and to express within 17 syllables is challenging :)
      Thanx and kep visiting!

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  9. Indeed it can ruin things. Sometimes it can't be helped just like the real tsunami...*wry smile.*

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    1. may be you are right, but we should control our tsunami rage as it can ruin relation beyond repair!

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  10. Beautiful play of words. Loved the flow of emotions in it.

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  11. Very true lines! beautifully penned :)

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