write a poem in which each line except the last takes the form of a single, declarative sentence. Then, the final line should take the form of a question. With any luck, this will result in poems that have a sort of driving, reportorial tone, but with a powerful rhetorical finish
I am irked and perturbed
I am irked and perturbed
I wonder why you don’t call
I am always the one to take initiatives, so
I decide to wait this time
I get bored waiting all this while
My patience is over,
I call and your phone goes busy
This sends me in a dizzy
I wait all over again
Leftover patience goes down the drain.
I instantly pick up when you call, but
I guess you have decided not to speak up
I talk and I chat; like old days you don’t show interest
I wonder what is wrong; you dismiss saying ‘nothing to ponder’
My suspicion cloud thunders:
Has the essence of our love gone stale?
the greatest challenge in any long relationship is to maintain the initial intensity of love....beautiful thought,good one
ReplyDeleteYou are very right, you have to reinvigorate love in a new way, each time!
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Even love needs a not of manures and fertilizers!
ReplyDeleteYes it does need a lot of fertilizers and manures! Its a plant that we need to water and care for!
DeleteLove is a bloom and it may get drooped and dropped if proper care is not taken . Nice, beautiful composition.
ReplyDeleteIt is very true. Thanx!
Deletenice one
ReplyDelete:) thanx
DeleteNice one keep writing Dear !
ReplyDeleteThanx. keep visiting! :)
DeleteLove needs emoticons to carry on...
ReplyDeleteYes it does and that too enduring one.
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