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Nanu was breathing steadily on the hospital bed. Oxygen mask
was intact and the dialysis machine did its work at intervals! The monitors
were constantly beeping giving an eerie feel to the whole ambience. What else
could someone feel, besides?
Kito, his granddaughter, was standing outside peeping
through the circular glass window of the ICU door. As tears rolled down her
cheeks she fell on the wheelchair outside.
***
It was on the wheelchair that Nanu was first brought to the
emergency ward six months back. He had a paralysis attack on the left side. Numerous
tests later doctors diagnosed weakness and old age as the cause. Nanu once had
a heart attack in the past so doctors also linked his current state to the past
medical history.
Nanu at 74 was brimming with life and positive energy. He
always wanted to live and experience the world. The more he explored, the more
he wanted to. To him life was a beauty bestowed from the heaven above.
In the emergency ward, with his own will power he stood up
taking support. He walked albeit slowly in spite of the contrary suggestions by
his family members. He believed in mind power and Yogic healing. Soon he was
discharged. He was back at home and everyone was happy!
***
Six months had passed. He again had weakness in his limbs
accompanied by constant pain. He was loosing his usual vigor and charm. That was
so unusual about him. He collapsed one day.
He was again rushed to the emergency ward of the city
hospital. Doctors in the small town could not diagnose the reason. He was
airlifted to Mumbai. Suddenly he had multiple organ failure. Kito didn’t have
the heart to bear what doctors had to say.
To the shock of everyone he was in the last stage of blood
cancer. The onset had begun 6 months back when he had paralytic attack.
***
Kito was still sobbing on the wheelchair when doctors rushed
inside the I.C.U. To Kito’s utter dismay Nanu breathed his last. She was numb
with pain in her heart; if only, Doctors could have diagnosed six months
earlier, he would be ALIVE and kicking to spread happiness, laughter and Joy.
Alas! No more.
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Very touching.....
ReplyDeleteThank you Bushra, btw inspired by true incidents!
DeleteInspired by you I have also submitted a post to white tribe :)
ReplyDeleteNeedless to say you have written it quite beautifully :) :)
Oh thats nice, Thank you!
DeleteI will read it right away! :)
Kislaya could you please see if I have now linked it properly and its visible thanks !!
DeleteYour description of Nanu's paralytic attack brought back memories of my own Nanu's sufferings... Definitely makes us sad, but then they have moved to a place where there is no more pain...
ReplyDeleteOh God Reshma! Good to hear that they are in a place where there is no more pain... Oh I miss him so so much!
DeleteI understand that everyone has their own share of pain and sufferings, even you recalled Your Nanu...
May be this is what world is all about!
Hi kislaya, this is a very moving and soulful account.
ReplyDeleteThank you Usha ji!
DeleteTouching post. One can visualise the whole flow of events as if happening in front of one's eyes. Thank you for this post.
ReplyDeleteThank you... Yes touching it is...inspired by true life incidents..!
Deletegood read and really a moving post..
ReplyDeleteThanx Meera!
DeleteVery good read, touching
ReplyDeletePoignant...
ReplyDeletea little sorrowful yet so practical .. at last we are left with reasons .. the one who has to go leaves .touching post !
ReplyDeleteYes u are right, one who has to leave goes! Thanx Nitesh.
DeleteGripping read...and as i believe whatever we may think, do or believe...Fate has it's own story to tell which no one knows...IF ONLY people could know what was in store for them...life would be very different by what it is now...!!!
ReplyDeleteDefinitely Anjan, if people could see what was in store for them life would be different and manipulated to a large extent. Its good that we live in present and cant predict, life would have lost its charm.
DeleteNice, touching story
ReplyDeleteThanx
DeleteIts a heartfelt story ... beautifully penned and articulated ....
ReplyDeleteThank you Aziz
DeleteOh! That is so sad, losing some one so dear.
ReplyDeleteIt is very sad, hard to imagine.
DeleteUmmm.....its scary, but life is unpredictable.....
ReplyDeleteVery unpredictable
DeleteOh! That's very sad and touching. But at the same time, it gives a hint to the healthcare situation our country is facing.
ReplyDeleteOh yes that is a valid point you have raised, healthcare needs a major boost, esp the primary and secondary healthcare service.
Deletetouching one
ReplyDeleteThnx
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