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I want to be free
Like a flying bird
High in the sky
Without any sigh!
I want to be free
Like a gliding duck
Swimming without bother
With no illusion of luck!
I want to be free
Like a running ostrich
Gliding through air
With no worries of being rich!
I want to be free
Like a standing tall tree
Living on its own term
Yet giving to everyone!
I want to be free
Like a shooting star
Far away
Yet an aura for every heart!
freedom comes through expression also...i learnt through this poem.simple yet subtle.
ReplyDeleteI am glad that you liked it! :)
ReplyDeletesimple and insightful. Enjoyed reading it.
ReplyDeleteA typo in first line of 2nd stanza...you have missed 'be'
Thanx Arch Wordsmith! And thank you for notifying the error, I have rectified it. I appreciate your feedback! :)
DeleteVery Nice expression!
ReplyDeleteThank you for appreciating :)
DeleteBeautifully written...Being free is greatest joy!!
ReplyDeleteThanx Sri Valli!
DeleteThe feeling of free ! well expressed through this poem ! quite rhythmic too ..
ReplyDeleteOh Thank you Aziz for liking it! :)
DeleteFreedom is like Manna from the sky, needed for growth. Like it.
ReplyDeleteWhat does manna mean?
DeleteThanx for appreciating!
I want to be free from the human body :)
ReplyDeletenice read !!
ha ha ... ! :)
DeleteHope you attain that freedom soon!!
ReplyDeleteMe too hoping the same! :)
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ReplyDeletenicely expressed :)
ReplyDeletethanx :)
Deletesimple.. rhyming.. powerful. beautifully expressed :)
ReplyDeleteOh Thank you Meera for appreciating! :)
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