In the GOLDEN sunshine
My skin glows YELLOW
You see me with CRIMSON desire
My cheeks turn FUCHSIA PINK
As we drink ORANGE juice
On the WHITE sand beach
Under the AZURE sky
We forget our BLUES
We gaze and we look into
Each other’s CHAMOISEE eyes
We are lost in LAVENDER love
Holding each other’s TANNED hands
In the PEARLY ambience
As the SILVER time flows
You draw me near
Caress my JET-BLACK hair
Kiss my RED lips!
And lock our COLORED love!
very sweet and colourful love :)
ReplyDeleteYes Definitely, Thanx :)
DeleteBrilliant post filled with colors!!!!! Loved it!
ReplyDeleteThank You samar!
DeleteColorful post with right elements of words !
ReplyDeleteNice Post !
:) Thanx Aziz for appreciating!
DeleteLove brings beautiful Colours in life
ReplyDeleteOh Yes it does! :)
DeleteAn ode one but quite artistically done :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Ankur for appreciating! :)
Deletesure, the love is with a riot of colors.nice composition.
ReplyDeleteThanx, riot of colour makes us lively!
DeleteColorful and romantic poem!
ReplyDeleteThank you Sri Valli! :)
DeleteHey Kislaya. This is a superb composition based on a great idea. Inclusion of the corresponding colours on desired places has given it an aura much needeed for a romantic composition. ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC.
ReplyDeleteYou see me with CRIMSON desire
My cheeks turn FUCHSIA PINK
My fav. lines. Keep flourishing dear. :)
Deepak Thanx for getting the essence behind this composition! Your appreciation has really made my day! That the inclusion of colours in corresponding places is liked by you, means a lot, because while doing so this was the idea behind it, in my mind.
DeleteThanx so much! :)
Oh Wow ! This is awesome and very colourful.!!
ReplyDeleteThank you! :)
Deletewhat an awesome achievement. 28 days of beautiful poems. I must confess,I was too chicken even to try. Loved the colours.
ReplyDeleteOh Wow Sonia, thanx for appreciating. :)
DeleteKeep visiting!
That was beautifully colorful!!
ReplyDelete:) Thank you Deepak!
Deletevery creative. very colorful. very very romantic. loved it :)
ReplyDeleteThanx Meera for liking it, very very much :)
DeleteThat's really amazing! Awesome idea!
ReplyDeleteOh thanx for liking it ! :)
Deletewat a wonderful idea!its really attractive n romantic of course...
ReplyDeleteHmm... yes it is...Thank you so much for appreciating! :)
Deletecolorful love :)
ReplyDelete:) thanx Joshi for the visit!
DeleteIndeed colorful and thoughtful at same time
ReplyDeleteThank you Sushant! Indeed colourful!
Deletea beautiful composition about the most pure feeling in the world 'Love'
ReplyDeleteGlad you loved it Critic 'Shubhra'!! :)
DeleteVery cool wordplay on the meaning of different colour, all representing a wonderful love story... :-)
ReplyDeleteOh yes definitely!
DeleteLove at its best.. :)
smiles...this is a colorful love for sure...love the lavender love and yeah...we should never love just black and white...smiles
ReplyDeleteThanx Claudia for getting the message behind it, I am happy thst you appreciated.
Deleteha. very nice...i like your play with color in this....there is so much color int he world that we need to appreciate, well beyond what we are comfortable with..smiles.
ReplyDeleteYes, life is full of colors only we need to be receptive, we need to percieve it.
DeleteThnx
So creative and colorful, with a message that is warm and wonderful.
ReplyDeleteOh thank you love is colourful and beautiful, a divine feeling
DeleteLife without colour is a life with soul!
ReplyDeleteYes what is life without colour? Thanx for visiting this space!
DeleteBrilliant post filled with colors.
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Very well written and presented.
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